I think it's a good idea to present in class and explain one of the news from our blog because it shows the interest that we give to the news we publish and also helps us to practice English in an oral form for me is the part more English major. these exposures with other students can see the blogs of colleagues and also can learn things that might please and did not know who might be interested. As a companion to the news exposes other students are more attentive as well and they are the ones who score are critical failures and observe their peers and not do them too.
Jesuuus you have a mistake in this text, have a look here: "we publish and also helps us" and i think that you have to write that like this: it also helps us... because if you are refering to the news you have to write now a subject.
ResponderEliminarHello Jesus!! I think that I can help you. First, I want tell you have to put ''it helps'' because it is very importnat the subject. When you say ''also helps us to practice English in an oral form for me is the part more English major.'', you must put ''that'' before ''for me...'' because the sentence didn't have meaning.
ResponderEliminarMoreover, I would put ''the most important part'' because I think that is a better expression.
I think that you have to write more information but I like your opinion!! kisses.